I corrected some of it. (well, most of it). But it's great! Please improve spelling. And listen carefully to the song. But you make me smile. Xd. Keep up the good work!. But better performance in the typing!. Ok?. You worked hard for it so I'm not gonna correct everything you type. So good job! But I like your songs. Maybe some celebrities will look at this someday! So check your spelling or maybe you can type really fast and you can't look to what your typing. But good! I'm not angry I am just teaching you how to check some errors in the spelling when you are doing some lyrics. Because maybe who is gonna sing the song and might say the errors. Ok?. You got it. Maybe some day you be a great writer if you improve. Well if you are a child or a young kid I understand perfectly. But if you are an adult you are already grown you should learn how to check. Ok? Please follow my advice!. I wish it was helpful. Good luck on your other lyrics!. Bye. : d